Thursday, June 6, 2013

Togetherness !





Verses Of BOY:
I think of YOU and ME
And the idea of TOGETHERNESS
Seems DELIGHTFUL, like heaven
I think of YOUR HEART
Thudding, gently THUMPING
In the SILENCE
And I BELIEVE
It takes TWO to make a SYMPHONY
WILL YOU MARRY ME?

Verses Of GIRL:
You talk of MUSIC and DANCES
Mister! You know, you should know
That life is not a PARTY
And LOVE, is but a LUXURY
You can BARELY afford
Toilet paper and grocery
But, the idea of TOGETHERNESS
Is not THAT BAD
DO YOU BELIEVE IN ETERNITY?

The above verses are both nonnets, and are my special TRIBUTE to this girl who has made me crazily in love with her.

This poetic conversation is to propose her, if I can be hers for the rest of the eternity, to LOVE her and to be LOVED BY HER.

Now all that matters is that I AM IN LOVE with her, and I truly hope that she says YES.

38 comments:

  1. please marry Angad he really loves u

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    1. Preet, thanks a lot for these straight and to the point words, you hit the nail on the head.

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    2. Dude!
      You have got quite a direct approach.

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    3. direct approach requested from Angad himself

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  2. and keep u happy till eternity..

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  3. don't know how to convince you girl... but believe me He is a very sweet guy I ever come across... very helpful, lot of patience, full of love, very vibrant, kind hearted and what's not... I wish if you could say "yes" to him... I assured you, you will never regret in your life for this yes..what else a girl ever need??? baby close your eyes and think for a while and make a decision. BUT A WISE DECISION... GOD BLESS

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    1. Saumya, you have magic in your words. Frankly speaking, if I would have been in her place, then after reading your comment I would have said yes to myself. Love you for your support ~hugs~

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  4. Speechless at the moment but you must remember lobe starts and grows each and everyday you spend talking to each other ,,,just have to find out if its real love or a freindship love but i do wish the best to both hugges

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    1. Dithe, thanks a lot for your words of wisdom, and i assure you, we will explore different realms of Love, before committing to each other. Love you ~hugs~

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  5. I don't know this girl that you are speaking of,but I do know you!I know you have been waiting for the girl of your dreams, to step into your life!You are a great friend! You are kind and gentle,never speak harshly and a good listener. Anyone that has those qualities in a friend,would definitely make a good husband!you are ready to give your heart to that special person! I hope this girl has an eye for EXCELLENCE,because she would most definitely...Choose YOU!!!

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    1. Terry, thanks a lot for so much of appreciation, I don't know if I deserve all this but you made me blush. Love you ~hugs~

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  6. itna acha likhta hai m Surprise why ur still single

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    1. Kyuki abhi tak isne mujhe haan nahi boli, maska laga na isko ki ye mujhe haan bol de, please ;;)

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  7. U may not be perfect but u r a limited edition.....

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    1. thanks Abhishek, I know I am just UNIQUE

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    2. U r welcome....

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    3. :D thanks buddy
      by the way party pending hai, jldi se delhi aa k party de

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  8. Its jst a show off, if u really real love her
    gooo & propose her ryt now

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    1. Are you blind or are you illiterate?
      I think the writer clearly mentioned that it's his way of proposing.
      So stop being a jerk and let him do the things in his own unique way.

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    2. My dear Unknown Admirer, thanks for telling this jerk what I would have told him/her :D

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    1. aray yaar pehle yahan to koi reply aane de, fir formally bhi kar dunga :p

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  10. Liked your idea of proposing a girl by writing nonnets for her and letting others convince her to say yes, unusual and unorthodox for sure, but surely creative and bold. If I wouldn't have been married, then I surely would have hunted you down and married you. Your Love for this girl makes her the luckiest girl in life. Bless you both.

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  11. Novel likhna start kr doh ..... Ur gud at writng things ..... Jst perfect

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  12. Just remember to listen to her and if you dont understand have it explain to you ,,most of the time you can feel and understand by the look in ones eye huggess and the feel in ones heart

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  13. awesome lines bro....hats off to you..!!

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  14. Words fall in place to make verses wen d words r notes frm d chords o heart
    n u r just a hand away frm ur luck
    say yes gal

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  15. i hope you get her.. wish u always d best ! hmm .. anyways a well wisher ! tc.

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  16. Surely, YES Hai. . . Don't Worry Just Believe Yourself. . God BlesS.

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    1. Till now, there has been no answer, but i believe it will be a YES

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